I just glanced away
No one but you and I knew
Silence, pause, is key
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Purple, angry scar
Spoke volumes but said nothing
Questioning despair
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In the dark, leaves dance
Ghosts laugh in the hidden world
Branches twist, crack, twirl
Silence is the key to so many mysterious things…
Sunflower Mystery
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your last stanza reveals ghosts parties…
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i liked the first and last ones.
Meeting ourselves in nature is indeed scary.
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Oh these are nice. I love the last one the most. Well done.
Melanie
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what a fun take.
charming imagery.
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You guys and your fish!
I’ve done a few paintings of fish, they are wonderful to get lost in. I also designed a Stained Glass Window/mirror that looked like a salt water fish tank..one of the coolest windows I designed while working for a stained glass company.
must find pictures.
I too love all your haiku’s but the scar was very moving to me. I have a couple of big scars, I remember when I first had surgery on my arm to remove a tumor, I was 15, i didn’t wear a shirt that would show it for a very long time. It was purple and scary. Now, it’s a faded scar, and I don’t care! It’s part of me, part of my past, part of something I’m very proud I lived through!!
wendy
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Whoa! My favorite is the Purple Scar — powerful!
the other two ain’t too shabby either — you created great imagery.
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I wanted to write about fish, but I figured you had that covered :)xoxo
Warm wishes, Laurie https://hibernationnow.wordpress.com
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