Shy (Photo credit: SriHarsha PVSS)
English: Sunset at Porto Covo, west coast of Portugal (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
Curled toes, sand digging
a whiff of air blowing cold
sunshine sleeps at night.
*****
White, lace dress, demure
dances wildly on her own
leaving me coy, shy.
*****
Air, thick with mud, stands
with evil eyes to taunt us
waiting for a breeze.
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I like the idea of eyes as part of this… beautiful.
Eliz
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Very visual; nice.
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“dances wildly on her own” Very visual and tells me about the person. I like this.
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Beautiful!!
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I really loved the second one 🙂
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thank you so much!
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lovely haiku to carry me thru the rest of my day =)
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so happy I could help!
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Nice set. Thanks for sharing!
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“Sunshine sleeps at night” That is a WONDERFUL line. Wonderful haiku too.
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This is such a beautiful poem, it paints a totally mesmerising picture in my mind. I loved it x
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These are so vivid. Enjoyed reading them.
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