Haiku Horizons, First

Posted on February 24, 2014 by hibernationnow.wordpress.com

When Love Breaks Down

When Love Breaks Down (Photo credit: an untrained eye)

Fear first, trembling, mask

face, bent, clenched like a secret

Her eyes lift, bright blue.

* * *

Trust me, he said, love,

hot lies whispered in her ear

Broken heart, raw truth,

* * *

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7 thoughts on “Haiku Horizons, First”

hibernationnow.wordpress.com on February 27, 2014 at 10:39 pm said:

Does anyone have the link to Haiku Horizons? I can’t seem to find it. It was pure luck last time. Thanks in advance.

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cheryl on February 27, 2014 at 5:47 pm said:

Sad yet powerful

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milan rajkumar on February 26, 2014 at 2:11 pm said:

i feel the pain ! quality of a masterpiece !!!

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Rallentanda on February 24, 2014 at 11:46 pm said:

Lot of hot lies whispered into ears by hot devils!

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Sumana Roy on February 24, 2014 at 12:57 pm said:

well penned… 🙂

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oneofaclass on February 24, 2014 at 12:20 pm said:

I second the wow! Raw truth indeed.
Thanks for joining Haiku Horizons!

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Alice Keys on February 24, 2014 at 12:14 pm said:

Wow. You did a good job with this one. Very deep and raw. I love it. 🙂 I’m glad to see you here.

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