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Haiku Horizons, Open

Posted on June 15, 2014 by hibernationnow.wordpress.com

Tornado cyclone

rips open, blood ripe corpses

Pale, straggling strangers.

Open, spirit, light

Glows within us, gentle souls

Guides true hearts to blend.

18 thoughts on “Haiku Horizons, Open”

chatycat on July 3, 2014 at 9:42 am said:

Very cool…..I love them both.

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Blog It Or Lose It on June 18, 2014 at 8:34 pm said:

such vast contrast in the haiku – very nice 🙂

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hibernationnow.wordpress.com on June 18, 2014 at 6:40 pm said:

I admit, I love the second one too but I put the first one in to show the contrast. Without one we cannot fully enjoy the other. Thanks for reading.

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Alice Keys on June 18, 2014 at 5:46 pm said:

Both are vivid and captivating.

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- hibernationnow.wordpress.com on June 18, 2014 at 6:40 pm said:
  
  Thank you, dear Alice.
  
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  - Alice Keys on June 18, 2014 at 10:18 pm said:
    
    You’re welcome, my friend.
    
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beloved76 on June 18, 2014 at 1:23 pm said:

Both Haiku have such different meanings and both are wonderful. I really like the first one. Your Photo is great.

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hibernationnow.wordpress.com on June 17, 2014 at 9:53 am said:

I agree Reshma, but the contrast almost helps me to see the second one purely.

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Panchali on June 17, 2014 at 9:10 am said:

Lovely images….!!

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- hibernationnow.wordpress.com on June 18, 2014 at 5:49 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much for reading, hope you will come again.
  
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reshma on June 16, 2014 at 7:11 pm said:

two contrasting openings, nicely done!! Loved the second one the most for the joy it brings 🙂

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readinpleasure on June 16, 2014 at 1:59 pm said:

I love the second one!

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milan rajkumar on June 16, 2014 at 11:39 am said:

i love the second one ! so spiritual and beautiful !

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menons129 on June 16, 2014 at 11:06 am said:

Nice pair of Haiku !

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- hibernationnow.wordpress.com on June 16, 2014 at 12:13 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much.
  
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Ramesh Sood on June 16, 2014 at 4:58 am said:

Second one is glowing.. loved it..

http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/06/she-opens-door-haiku.html

RS

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Englepappa on June 16, 2014 at 1:21 am said:

One dark, one light… Nice!

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- hibernationnow.wordpress.com on June 16, 2014 at 12:15 pm said:
  
  Thank you to all who took the time out of their busy lives to read. Come back soon.
  
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