Time, age, loved ones howl
sharp decline, ghost eyes, scared, sad
Lost memory weeps.
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Spicy woman laughs
declines help, dances with joy
eyes sparkle with hope.
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Jobless, hungry, poor
Decline of country’s spirit
We weep for children.
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o Laurie , the last one is so sad ! piercing …!!!
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Thank you? Not for it being sad but for invoking the feeling.
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A decline of spirit can leave one in a state of despair…
Down a Steep Decline
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Loveleeeeeee you and lovely photos and lovely haiku…..you are lovely.
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WOW!!
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Very touching, all three.
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The third one is very powerful!
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A nice bouquet of Haiku.
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Thank you so much, love the word bouqet…
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Loved them all. Very touching.
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Each one is good… shows feelings..
Well, I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/06/a-withering-rose.html
RS
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I always read them, every week, Ramesh but i have trouble not having a gmail account, to leave comments. they never appear and it always says something “in my url is illegal or missing the right letters.”
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LOL I didn’t think I needed to warn you in any of these. Thank you, my deeelicious friend.
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Oh my goodness – SPICEY WOMAN rocks (the haiku and picture). But then again anytime you talk about anything food-related it’s deeeeeeelicious
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