Hibernationnow's Blog

FOOD, LOVE, FIBRO, FUN

Haiku Horizons, Train

Posted on September 14, 2014 by hibernationnow.wordpress.com

Wedding of dreams, love

Pearl white, dress, train trailing hope

Amid sun burst clouds.





#145062448 / gettyimages.com

******************************************************************************

Train of thought, jumbled

dementia holds, gnarly grip

blank eyes staring back.





#152414842 / gettyimages.com

**********************************************************************************

Shove, push, jump, screaming

Train tracks, easy vehicles

Self-harm, blood, guts, death.





#1948659 / gettyimages.com

************************************************************************************

12 thoughts on “Haiku Horizons, Train”

Bastet on September 18, 2014 at 3:04 am said:

ah … so many definitions of train … loved the sunniness of the first one … so sad the second … and that last haiku is gripping.

LikeLike

Reply ↓
- hibernationnow.wordpress.com on September 20, 2014 at 4:00 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much Bastet for taking the time to read and reply! I was also happy with this trio,
  
  LikeLike
  
  Reply ↓
  - Bastet on September 20, 2014 at 10:50 pm said:
    
    Very welcome!
    
    LikeLike
Tracesofthesoul on September 16, 2014 at 8:32 pm said:

Oh shoot…how clever!! that first one is so beautiful, the second one so raw and sad (my mom has dementia) and the last one so heartwrenching…wonderful series!!

LikeLike

Reply ↓
Dani on September 15, 2014 at 8:08 am said:

Loved the first one.

LikeLike

Reply ↓
- hibernationnow.wordpress.com on September 15, 2014 at 11:01 am said:
  
  Thanks, Dani
  
  LikeLike
  
  Reply ↓
Ramesh Sood on September 15, 2014 at 2:48 am said:

Good ones.. I liked them all…

RS:)

LikeLike

Reply ↓
- hibernationnow.wordpress.com on September 15, 2014 at 8:44 am said:
  
  Thanks so much Ramesh!
  
  LikeLike
  
  Reply ↓
menons129 on September 15, 2014 at 12:14 am said:

Nice trio.

LikeLike

Reply ↓
- hibernationnow.wordpress.com on September 15, 2014 at 8:21 am said:
  
  Thank you menons129.
  
  LikeLike
  
  Reply ↓
CuriositytotheMax on September 14, 2014 at 8:25 pm said:

Whoops – looked at all 3 . . .
However, your interpretation of “train” is VERY diverse and creative

LikeLike

Reply ↓
- hibernationnow.wordpress.com on September 15, 2014 at 8:21 am said:
  
  I warned you…..:)
  
  LikeLike
  
  Reply ↓

Share this:

Like this:

Related

12 thoughts on “Haiku Horizons, Train”

Leave a Reply Cancel reply