English: Leaving traces on soft sand dunes in Tadrart Acacus a desert area in western Libya, part of the Sahara. Français : Un marcheur laisse des empreintes sur le sable mou des dunes de Tadrart Acacus, une zone désertique de l’ouest libyen appartenant au Sahara. Italiano: Tracce lasciate sulle soffici dune di sabbia nel Tadrart Acacus, un’area deserta nel sud-ovest libico, deserto del Sahara. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
A glimpse of nothing
Rocky mountains of tan sand
I thought I saw you.
*****
“Don’t leave me” he begged
She stared through his eyes and left
The door slam echoed.
*****
Imagine the world
an oasis of kindness
white velvet hands stroke.
*****
Chipping at my heart
like broken glass exploding
Did you have to leave?
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They wonderfully expressed how depressive bad endings get to you..
I have not submitted anything this week, just going round, admiring – ♥
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Powerful and beautiful haiku. 🙂
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Longing and loneliness resulting from love, very well expressed!
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First of all, awesome job….I felt hope, then dashed, dreams and a sad ending….Eliciting feelings denotes great verse, in my opinion….
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A desolate soul can be the result of loneliness… Well expressed haiku.
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Thank you.
Warm wishes, Laurie https://hibernationnow.wordpress.com
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Loved the 2nd and last one…Touching set!
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Liked the desertion and the desert.
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A very sensitive description of an inner desert!
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thank you so much, what a lovely description of the “inner desert!”
Warm wishes, Laurie https://hibernationnow.wordpress.com
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Chipping at my heart is a beautiful phrase, so emotive. I loved this set of haiku.
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Lovely weaving of words ~ I specially like the last one ~
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thanks so much for writing, Grace.
Warm wishes, Laurie https://hibernationnow.wordpress.com
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First of all: Wonderful wonderful haiku
Secondly: The soft “Imagine the world” haiku flanked by two haiku that express sharp, jagged “leaving”. Such an interesting placement & progression. Was it deliberate?
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of course!!! (not)
Warm wishes, Laurie https://hibernationnow.wordpress.com
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There’s more information there about your life in the placement and progression of the Haiku. It would be interesting to think about it.
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