Before eight, not six
not attached to eleven
simply, strong, seven.
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Smell, sloppy kisses
Drunk man and woman. Lovers?
Seven with Seven.
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Before eight, not six
not attached to eleven
simply, strong, seven.
****************************************************************
Smell, sloppy kisses
Drunk man and woman. Lovers?
Seven with Seven.
Nice and entertaining..like a Senryu..
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Interesting….well done..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/11/seven-seas-haiku.html
RS
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My Highest compliment – wish I had thought of these uses of the prompt!
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ha ha that’s your highest compliment, my funny friend. it was the only two that came straight to my scrambled head. nothing else!!! right from the heart to yours.
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I found both of these entertaining. 🙂
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alice, of all people I knew you would! 🙂 so glad.
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🙂 It’s good you know your fans!
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LOL yes, it is, alice!
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🙂
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Really like that first one, made me smile. Nice work on both of them.
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nice haiku….
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Very different take on the prompt.
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